I really enjoyed this essay. Coming from a family where my mother is a professional photographer, she definitely knows what taking a good picture looks like. I really like how you included the different elements, such as line, shape, form, etc. However, in any essay we write, we were told not to use first person. In the second paragraph, you used, "In my opinion", and I feel like this would be prefect if we were allowed to use first person. That is the only flaw I have with this paper. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this essay. Great work! :)
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Judy Wells
5/23/2013 07:14:05 am
I loved reading about photography and seeing it portrayed as a work of art. This essay was packed full of knowledgable information and really made me want to pick up a camera and start creating my own photographs. Great job!
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Kara Heichelbech
5/24/2013 05:32:23 am
I really liked the set-up of your essay. It flowed really nicely, especially as the topics progressed. I think you give good descriptions and really explain the process well.
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